http://savoringtherainbow.blogspot.sg
Esther, Index 12
I think that her blog was well organised, with many pictures, making the blog very attractive. Though, I feel that she could improve her blog further by analysing her diet with more than just 1 method. Her reflections are very insightful and readers can tell that she has put in a lot of effort in doing it.
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http://greenbeansandleaves.blogspot.sg
Shu Yi, Index 7
I think that her blog was detailed and informative. She should cut down the text to make the information more reader-friendly. On the whole, her blog is well organised and could do with more pictures.
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http://fattyfoodworld.blogspot.sg
Faye, Index 5
I think that her blog is very well done, with results of more than 1 type of method used to analyse her diet. She has many pictures and diagrams in the blog, with a lot of relevant information stated. Her reflections show deep thought throughout the whole process.
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